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Saturday, December 17, 2016

Poem Review, "Lord Of The Fishes" By Tan Pratonix



Poem Review- “Lord of the Fishes” by Tan Pratonix


I’m not a philosopher who ignores the Bible.  In fact, little attention for a book of books is anything but terra firma. Without one’s sense of rhyme, one is bound to be silent in articulation yet noisy with confusion.  Is the close star blazing in circulation to the broken nets, or glazing like the depth of endless hours?  It’s hard to tell if voice is an exact catch of literacy or such a motto in shining feel over things.  When I read my poems out loud for YouTube, I keep my hunger in mind.  As I mention “silvery treasure” in fresh privacy, endurance is a phrase in my mouth akin to canoe rafting.  Divinity becomes cliché or a concept external of mind to average folks as they shop against food labels with phrases like “divine turkey” or “another feast”, yet it’s sunshine out of exhaustion during the prayer’s act of sweating tears.  I do wonder how God is the Lord of fishes because Christians themselves disagree on the Jesus concept.  Is Jesus God, or is God Jesus?  I guess if there’s enough fire to roast in boatmen’s hearts, especially the weather of blood as miracles go against dreamy sins, fishes will soak up rays of macular echoes in gracious habit all on Jesus’s plate with Mr. Pratonix’s piercing meditation.    


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